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Nope, it appears to be the same script. Although I just did a once-over for the time being.I found a couple of other differences besides the dialogue during the SWAT Kats and Felina's fight with the Tri-Head.
She whirls and nods as we PAN OVER to Laszlo, Otto and the other Servant. Otto pushes a button as an observatory wall spins to reveal a groggy Felina, tied to a chair. She looks up and REACTS, struggling against her bonds.She activates the SWAT Kat beeper by rocking herself back and forth until the chair falls over so she can press the button:
OTS - ON KATRINAIn the revised 5/17/94 draft the Tremblays gave to you, however, Felina is simply dragged into the observatory by Laszlo, Otto and the other guy, and thrown on the floor:
The chair (its back is TO CAMERA, in the FOREGROUND) rocks back and forth as wee see that Felina's struggles have exposed the Swat Kat beeper in her back pocket.
Smart girl! But it won't save your uncle! By the end of the eclipse, he'll be totally drained!
As she reacts, with a twist that sends her chair falling over backwards with a CRASH.
LOW ANGLE - FLOOR
As Felina sees the beeper and hits the button with her shoulder. The blue light begins to FLASH.
She turns as we PAN OVER to see Laszlo, Otto and the other Servant enter dragging a groggy Felina, bound with ropes. They drop her to the ground.With her hands tied behind her back, she manages to press the button of the beeper in her pants pocket. It also happens right after she's brought in instead of slightly later:
*ANGLE - FELINA ON THE FLOORLeopold still mentions the secret room later on during the climax, though, apparently forgetting during the revision that he'd written it out:
*We see the SWAT Kat beeper sticking out of her back pocket. PUSH IN as her bound hands find the button and press it. The BLUE LIGHT FLASHES.
WIDER - TO INCLUDE TWO GARGOYLES (LASZLO AND SERVANT)There's a few other differences as well. I'll have to catalogue them the way I did for The Pastmaster Always Rings Twice's script vs. its finished episode.
They've CRASHED through the wall of the hidden room and are using their GLOWING EYES to fire at Felina and T-Bone.
Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Tue Jun 25, 2019 3:02 am
Nope, it appears to be the same script. Although I just did a once-over for the time being.As it turns out, I found a couple of minor differences. The one Mark sent me is dated 5/13/94, while the final draft is also dated 5/13/94, but is identified as being revised 5/17/94.
T-BONEIn the same copy, when talking to her uncle in his office, Felina only identifies Katrina as "Ms. Moorkroft."
Good thing we got the Turbokat fixed in time!
FELINAIn the one the Tremblays provided, she says:
No, it's getting to you. I'm going to have a little chat with Ms. Moorkroft.
FELINAIdentifying her by her first and last name.
No, it's getting to you. I'm going to have a little chat with Ms. Katrina Moorkroft.
RAZORIn the revised version he says:
T-Bone! Jettison Glovatrixes!
RAZORThis is a... very odd change.
T-Bone! Set Glovatrixes to blow!
Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Mon Sep 17, 2018 5:11 am
Okay, so I'm actually reading the script in it's entirety instead of just glancing through it.It’s such good snark though XD Feral deserves it.
Felina: So you're not even going to check her out?
Feral: I certainly am. I'm meeting her for lunch.
*snort* OMG. I can't even imagine Feral saying that. XD
Statistics: Posted by AkaneKitty — Sat Jul 28, 2018 8:49 pm
Statistics: Posted by Ty-Chou — Sat Jul 28, 2018 8:43 pm