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Succubus!

The following are the most recent posts from a dedicated MegakatCity.com thread for Succubus!:

Kooshmeister Says:

Thanks, Mark. Next up is Turmoil 2, which ought to be a little livelier.

Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Sat Nov 17, 2018 11:11 am

Behold my incredibly boring voice...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wx0bqDRBHcA

Don't worry, Koosh,I've heard worse voices. (My own, for example.) I think you did a good job retelling the script.

Statistics: Posted by marklungo — Sat Nov 17, 2018 10:43 am

Kooshmeister Says:

Behold my incredibly boring voice...

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Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Fri Nov 16, 2018 10:23 pm

Kooshmeister Says:

I'll of course go through the two versions with a more fine-toothed comb later on to see what else is different, if anything. For now, though, those are the only things that leaped out at me.

Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Tue Sep 18, 2018 2:16 pm

Echo Says:

I like "jettison glovatrixes" better, or maybe "TBone, eject glovatrixes!" or something along the line of that.

Statistics: Posted by Echo — Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:10 pm

In the revised version he says:
RAZOR
T-Bone! Set Glovatrixes to blow!
This is a... very odd change.

I think "blow" is supposed to mean "explode", but... yeah, not the best choice of words there.

Statistics: Posted by marklungo — Tue Sep 18, 2018 11:52 am

Nope, it appears to be the same script. Although I just did a once-over for the time being.

As it turns out, I found a couple of minor differences. The one Mark sent me is dated 5/13/94, while the final draft is also dated 5/13/94, but is identified as being revised 5/17/94.

In the copy Mark sent me, T-Bone has a line at the beginning of Act III that isn't present in the final version:

T-BONE
Good thing we got the Turbokat fixed in time!

In the same copy, when talking to her uncle in his office, Felina only identifies Katrina as "Ms. Moorkroft."

FELINA
No, it's getting to you. I'm going to have a little chat with Ms. Moorkroft.

In the one the Tremblays provided, she says:

FELINA
No, it's getting to you. I'm going to have a little chat with Ms. Katrina Moorkroft.

Identifying her by her first and last name.

Razor's dialogue in the original draft about how to handle the Tri-Head is different:

RAZOR
T-Bone! Jettison Glovatrixes!

In the revised version he says:

RAZOR
T-Bone! Set Glovatrixes to blow!

This is a... very odd change.

Statistics: Posted by Kooshmeister — Mon Sep 17, 2018 5:11 am

Okay, so I'm actually reading the script in it's entirety instead of just glancing through it.

Favorite line:

Felina: So you're not even going to check her out?

Feral: I certainly am. I'm meeting her for lunch.

*snort* OMG. I can't even imagine Feral saying that. XD

It’s such good snark though XD Feral deserves it.

Statistics: Posted by AkaneKitty — Sat Jul 28, 2018 8:49 pm

Ty-Chou Says:

Okay, so I'm actually reading the script in it's entirety instead of just glancing through it.

Favorite line:

Felina: So you're not even going to check her out?

Feral: I certainly am. I'm meeting her for lunch.

*snort* OMG. I can't even imagine Feral saying that. XD

Also this: (I am paraphrasing)

Feral: Imma ask her to marry me.

Felina: Uncle, no...

Feral: Uncle, YES!

Statistics: Posted by Ty-Chou — Sat Jul 28, 2018 8:43 pm

Kooshmeister Says:

Oh, and since the movie Lifeforce came up a lot in the podcast as a possible inspiration for this episode, here's some pics from said film to further prove my point.

The lead succubus/"vampire" chick (played by French actress Mathilda May) is very Katrina-like in appearance.

And the drained corpses looked eerily similar to what Leopold describes in the Succubus! script.

Grayson from The Nut Job is helping me censor this first image; even though nothing is really visible, it's still the bare crotch area of a naked dead guy.